Man, does anyone know who wrote the team history that appears on the revamped Frontenacs website? Here’s a typical grammar-challenged sentence:

The next season however saw the Frontenacs return to the previous two seasons, as the team blew an eight point lead to St,Mike’s over the last four weeks of the season and missed the playoffs.

This is on the actual website of an actual major junior hockey club. Talk about amateur hour. I have to admit, though, the level of brutal honesty is rather refreshing for an official team website:

The next two seasons saw the Frontenacs’ relocate to their familiar “last in the Leyden” spot, until a break through season in 1992-93.

Then there’s the treatment that the “official team history” gives to former owner Lou Kazowski, who owned the team for a year-plus in the late 1980s. Kazowski’s little more than a bad memory to Kingston fans, but man, is it necessary to smear him like this?

After the season, as the story goes, Kazowski was losing money and his with his shifty business dealings, Kazowski was ready to move the club to Owen Sound …

I can’t help but wonder if Kazowski is still active as a businessman and how he feels of being accused of engaging in “shifty business dealings.” It probably wouldn’t hurt him financially, but man, if you’re a businessman, you don’t want that up on the internet.

Look, no one is perfect and I know my grammar and spelling are perfect. However, the team’s website is supposed to look professional. This is amateur. They couldn’t get a first-year Queen’s stuent who’s really good in English to read it over first?